P1, M1, D1 D You have produced a portfolio of examples of editing techniques and conventions that have been annotated to explain these techniques with some detailed contemporary examples, and their purpose, and how conventions of continuity, montage and discontinuity developed from early filmmakers. (Merit/Distinction) Your timeline explains the developments in film editing referring to examples of films and filmmakers across the Early and Modern periods and explains their purpose. There is a confident discussion of how one stage led on to the other within the development of the principles of special effects, continuity, soviet montage, new wave and argues how this has developed to influence stylistic techniques of contemporary auteurs in independent cinema with reference to detailed examples. (Distinction) Your video guide has some elements of Distinction argument and provides comparison of principals and purposes of editing, though not in depth with contemporary examples. P2 M2 D2 D Prepare for editing - all steps have been followed to a standard approaching professional practice within a realistic time constraint. The screen grabs of digitising footage into 3 bins per scene, logging the clips, reviewing the rushes, creating a Final Cut generated EDL along with the editors log demonstrate competence and a Merit level of understanding why preparation for editing is necessary. The preparation is thorough and complete to award the Distinction. P3 M3 D3 P The thriller narrative sequence has been edited to produce a preliminary rough cut, then a 5 minute short film https://youtu.be/YzC0hYMG8Ic Continuity broken not making sense with the flashbacks (repeatedly used – narrative unclear) and brightness effects. Chase sequence lacks pace and just comes to a stop. There are a few jump cuts and many temporal overlaps where footage is repeated several times. An attempt has been made to be creative with the use of flashbacks during the final scene to create genre. The edit was completed to a realistic timescale under controlled conditions and you worked in a manner approaching professional standards.
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D You have produced a portfolio of examples of editing techniques and conventions that have been annotated to explain these techniques with some detailed contemporary examples, and their purpose, and how conventions of continuity, montage and discontinuity developed from early filmmakers. (Merit/Distinction)
Your timeline explains the developments in film editing referring to examples of films and filmmakers across the Early and Modern periods and explains their purpose. There is a confident discussion of how one stage led on to the other within the development of the principles of special effects, continuity, soviet montage, new wave and argues how this has developed to influence stylistic techniques of contemporary auteurs in independent cinema with reference to detailed examples. (Distinction)
Your video guide has some elements of Distinction argument and provides comparison of principals and purposes of editing, though not in depth with contemporary examples.
P2 M2 D2 D Prepare for editing - all steps have been followed to a standard approaching professional practice within a realistic time constraint. The screen grabs of digitising footage into 3 bins per scene, logging the clips, reviewing the rushes, creating a Final Cut generated EDL along with the editors log demonstrate competence and a Merit level of understanding why preparation for editing is necessary. The preparation is thorough and complete to award the Distinction.
P3 M3 D3 P The thriller narrative sequence has been edited to produce a preliminary rough cut, then a 5 minute short film https://youtu.be/YzC0hYMG8Ic Continuity broken not making sense with the flashbacks (repeatedly used – narrative unclear) and brightness effects. Chase sequence lacks pace and just comes to a stop. There are a few jump cuts and many temporal overlaps where footage is repeated several times. An attempt has been made to be creative with the use of flashbacks during the final scene to create genre. The edit was completed to a realistic timescale under controlled conditions and you worked in a manner approaching professional standards.